In my research paper rough draft, I feel pretty confident about my introduction. I feel like that is the strongest part of my paper and I trust that it will get the reader hooked on my topic, which is The Haitian Revolution. However, I am unsure about some of my arguments. I feel like I have made a good argument but they may not make sense, making them bad. For instance, I have transitions that might be taken the wrong way, or I might have repeated myself in the same paragraph.
To make my paper better, I have to change some of the transition to make them less "awkward," and edit a few of my arguments to make them very advanced. Also, I need to make sure I properly cited all of my sources. I need to focus my feedback on transitions when I read. I know how to do transitions, but not enough to get an A in that category. So, I am feeling well about how my paper will turn out, and cannot wait to be finished with it.
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